I'm not sure about it, and if it weren't for my National Poetry Writing Month commitment, it is the kind of poem I would usually consider a fragile seedling, which I'd put in the 'nursery' folder to see if it will grow into something I like over time. But as I have made a poem-a-day commitment, in the spirit of being open about what actually comes down the pen, here it is.
Rain pause over, spring resumes
The
stick that was white is wet again.
Birch
buds bursting
look
like a struggle
but
damp earth
smells
as if it will ease them.
Are
the willows sorry for the primroses?
No.
Nor are the primroses
as
lonely as they seem.
Nothing
is forlorn.
This
is just how it is now
while
the air is still
as
thin as birdsong
and
the pull of the whale-road north
is
strong enough
to
wind the wind-skeins up again.
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